Monday, April 10, 2006

Fake Smile

Fake Smile

A fake smile
just for a while

For all the planning, all the courage
reward is no more
a fake smile
just for a while

A mechanical process
no feelings
no emotions
lasts only till I keep looking in your eyes!!

Not completely useless though
atleast gives some hope
to turn the artificiality
into the humanity


But very infectious
now you'll also get
a fake smile
just for a while..

10 Comments:

Blogger Voice said...

nice poem.
nice subject.
good observation.
last paragraph is best i think becoz it concludes the poem beautifully

8:15 AM  
Blogger Psycho McCrazy said...

wonderful poem, and it sure brought to my face a smile after a lousy day.

8:46 AM  
Blogger saurabh said...

@bhau

thnx..
yeah the end is surely THE END :)

@psycho

but i thought its a sento :P

neways
thnx ya all for commenting
suru/kone wala

8:50 AM  
Blogger Hrishu Suman said...

Nice effort! A Fake Smile! Lasts only till I keep looking in your eyes! But at least gives some hope. Very infectious too... Where do you get these ideas man? Really an indepth analysis of Smile.. I dont' say Fake, because, i love smile on a girl's lips,, and to your definition they all are fake.. You know being mechanical student, I love mechanical smiles.. They at least show practicality... They show possibility of something to happen... AS You Told.. They at least give hope to turn the artificiality into the humanity.. Very true!.. Keep it up..

11:47 AM  
Blogger bp said...

before you decide
that it is a fake smile

give a bit more thought
it may be only your plot

the smile may become true
as more you glue

the smile may be fake
that I regret
but your post was awesome
which we celebrate.

9:24 PM  
Blogger saurabh said...

@hrishu
thnx.. its a kinda observation..when i met some1.. :-)

@bhaggu

aisa aisa comment maaroge to post kaun padhega :P
tumne to pel diya bhai..

thnx ya all for commenting
saurabh

9:42 PM  
Blogger Avinash singh said...

awesome post n really awesome comment by bhaggu... nehle pe nehla...

Waise saurabh yaar ab poems 4 lines ki bajay 8 lines ki likhna suru kar :)...

u have got great ideas n u can easily correlate them to make something comprehensible

3:12 AM  
Blogger saurabh said...

@avi

thnx bhai.. itni tareef ke kabil bhi nahi hai bhai.. its just an amateur tryin to put his thoughts..

9:38 AM  
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Anonymous Anonymous said...

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1:20 PM  

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