Friday, October 27, 2006

Hope and Me

Hope, My dear friend, told me
"I am the one who kept you alive
In good days
In bad days
It was me who carried you
When you could not move
In the darkness
In the suffering.

It was me who held your hand
When there was noone to wipe your tears

Still
You want me to leave
You are selfish and fool
You will die without me in a second."


I replied
"You say you were with me
In all the sufferings
In all the darkness
But truth is that
You were the one who brought
all the sufferings
all the darkness.

I never knew the difference
between the happiness and the suffering
between the light and the darkness.
And One Day
You showed me a smile
and said this is life
You showed me those sparkling eyes
and said this is happiness.

I was fool
I believed you and suffered
Now leave me,
I can live without you."

The Hope went away from me
And the most useless person died!!

16 Comments:

Blogger Psycho McCrazy said...

"and its hope... that keeps me holding on...." - listen to the song "hope" by shaggy

and i am really happy i wasn't that useless person who let hope go away....

9:35 AM  
Blogger Hrishu Suman said...

Great man!
It's entirely a new concept for me..
Your reply is really great..
I loved it..
I will give my hope the same reply someday..
Really a unique idea for me..
It's good to flip through..
Nice work! Keep it up..
:)

11:59 AM  
Blogger Hrishu Suman said...

Great man!
It's entirely a new concept for me..
Your reply is really great..
I loved it..
I will give my hope the same reply someday..
Really a unique idea for me..
It's good to flip through..
Nice work! Keep it up..
:)

12:05 PM  
Blogger Vivek Malewar said...

what's with the depression among people now a days !!!!
freshen up man
waise .. a good creation

3:55 AM  
Blogger Voice said...

pehle ek joke
It was me who held your hand
When there was noone to wipe your tears

kitna badmash hai hope. koi aur asho pochhne ke liye bhi nahi tha aur tere hath jinse tu anshu pochh sakta tha woh bhi hope pakar ke baitha tha..

jokes apart
yes, without hope no one will respire. it is hope which pumps our heart...
it is hope that made u write this post.


waise poem bahut achha hai

4:12 AM  
Blogger rohit said...

i do not read poems

12:25 AM  
Anonymous Mohit said...

Gautam Buddha: "The cause of all suffering and misery is desire."

Swami MRF: "Life becomes dormant without hope."

Very well said sir..

1:47 AM  
Blogger saurabh said...

@psycho..
Lucky Dog!!
@Hrishu
Thnx buddy
@mallu
kaa karee yaar
@voice
acha pj tha
@rohit
lucky dog!!
@mohit
aadat daal lo... bolo to roz ek funda du..

9:38 AM  
Blogger bp said...

ideas expressed well and lucid style...

11:19 PM  
Blogger Avinash singh said...

Amazing.. u r turning out be a much better author than i supposed u to be nd believe me i put u on top of the amture
bloggers.. u surely have some caliber on this road nd i WANT u to persue it...
Ur little words make so much sense .. really amazed..

but i disliked the last line.. who were u really referring to as useless person..
nd i m not at all pleased by that reference.. neway ur wish .. grrrrrr...

however.. really gd 1..

4:34 AM  
Blogger saurabh said...

@bp
thnx

@avi

Dont shower ur praise recklessly, keep it for someone deserving.


thnx ya all for commenting
suru/khabru

8:53 PM  
Blogger Voice said...

gifted.. u r.
to write such poems that too in 5-10 mins

1:27 AM  
Blogger Avinash singh said...

5-10 mins .. mind blowing job..
cool..
:D
:D
:D

Ab bol bina kuch soche thode hi likhte hian.. aage tu to samajhdaar hai hi...

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4:51 AM  
Blogger Voice said...

I want to write a poem like this now

2:07 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

good one life me kabh -kabhi aesa hota he ,wese Bachhan ji ne thik hi kaha he ...mridu mitti ke he bane hue pyale tuta hi karte he ,laghu jivan lekar aaye he hale tuta hi karte he,wo kachha pine wala he jiski mamta ghat pyalo par..isliye jo bit gayi so bat gayi..

7:34 PM  

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